While we feel your application is strong and shows great familiarity with the character, there are some instances in your personality section that could use tightening. Two in particular: His attitude towards the Tallests, and his attitude towards other species. The former is due to the contradictory description of Zim as freely defiant and unquestioning towards the Tallests - though the paradoxical nature of his behavior is understood by fans of the show, strengthening the internal reasoning or lack thereof is in order. The latter is due to the statement of simple superiority. Though Zim is of course an imperialist conqueror, over the course of the show's plot he is forced into many more complicated situations, including ones that force him to regard his rivals as temporary allies or even equals, however reluctantly. This is especially important as Carriero will be full of such situations.
As for your powers section: Zim will find his disguise, visual aids, and (rainbow-tipped) spider legs in his PAK. The remaining materials (his organ harvester, handheld laser gun, and so on) will be in a compartment that, should Zim attempt to open/unlock/break/etc. it himself, cause a short circuit in the PAK due to the dislodgement of metal. Linda will open it for him during events.
In addition, if the total list of items you would like Zim to have available at full power differs in any way from what you have listed (disguise, visual aids, spider-legs, additional tendrils, space suit, communicators, laser gun, organ harvester), please provide your preferred list in your reply. We approve of a size around the current one, keeping in mind that his canon variety of possessions is with full access to a stocked secret lab.
Please reply in 72 hours, by the 14th, with the requested revisions (and as soon as possible if this date is for whatever reason unamenable for you).
Revision of DOOM requested
As for your powers section: Zim will find his disguise, visual aids, and (rainbow-tipped) spider legs in his PAK. The remaining materials (his organ harvester, handheld laser gun, and so on) will be in a compartment that, should Zim attempt to open/unlock/break/etc. it himself, cause a short circuit in the PAK due to the dislodgement of metal. Linda will open it for him during events.
In addition, if the total list of items you would like Zim to have available at full power differs in any way from what you have listed (disguise, visual aids, spider-legs, additional tendrils, space suit, communicators, laser gun, organ harvester), please provide your preferred list in your reply. We approve of a size around the current one, keeping in mind that his canon variety of possessions is with full access to a stocked secret lab.
Please reply in 72 hours, by the 14th, with the requested revisions (and as soon as possible if this date is for whatever reason unamenable for you).